Laws of Society

This game is epic. So far the best game on gamejolt for me. I would pay money for this. Good job!

I sent you the email with the voice acting. If you got it, or you have any input just tell me on GameJolt, because I'm bound to see it before another email.

I was really disappointed by this. I thought you would use the art from the header in the game, but instead I got an excruciatingly boring and thoughtless maze game (the genre is incorrect by the way. A platformer is game like mario or sonic, this would probably be best fit in the other genre). The only reason why people like this game is because of the starting narrative and the decent art (in the beginning). But, the narrative isn't really redeeming either, it's just a wannabe 1984 distopia.

Sorry I'm being so negative, I was just really REALLY disappointed. If you're going to make a game focused on narrative, than it better have some damn good narrative. I highly recommend you go and play THANK YOU CITIZEN FOR YOUR SERVICE which does what you're trying to do, but much more effectively.

http://gamejolt.com/games/platformer/thank-you-citizen-for-your-service/25302/

I think you could take a lot from this. It has very creepy, cool, and disturbing dialogue which is made better by decent gameplay.

It looks great the theme song was also very moving would recommend to anyone!

Excellent atmosphere and music. I really hope to see a touching theme and story uncovered in the full version. Even this demo gives me the chills and depresses me (in a good way =D). I'd say don't rush and make this to a proper game.