should i change the dialogue here

(full dialogue in article)

bro just WRITING these flavour texts is giving me chills

very creative names for these sprites

https://gamejolt.com/p/which-do-you-think-is-better-more-emotion…

there is no way finale won

undertale last breath refere- oh wait this is undertale last breath

also i'm actually using this face in the game lol

heya

i cant turn around help im scared

but like why is this art kinda good-

I was then thrown back into the mental asylum

sans looks like he's witnessed a murd- oh wait he has