Here is half of the first chapter of the story. Leave suggestions of what I should add. Most of the story is already done but it still needs to be worked on. I hope you guys enjoy:

		
			                Chapter 1      
		
	

A Retired Navy Seal is having a retirement party, when he is ambushed by enemies. He then wakes up to find it was a dream. A dream of the retirement party he wanted, and a flashback of the fighting a week ago. You’ve actually been sleeping on the flight back home the whole time. You then play through the mission in his dream as he remembers it. After, you try going back to sleep. You’re abruptly woken by AAA guns hitting the plane. Your crewmates are all jostled, running around, and they’re all trying to evac everyone from the plane that’s losing altitude. You have 45 seconds to escape in a semi- quicktime event. At the end, if you succeed, you get hit by an RPG which blows you out of the plane. You hit a tree as you fall out of the plane, and then spin down to the ground. You’re hardly able to get up, and hear a radio that fell out of a plane: “Bravo Six, Bravo Six! Is anyone still there! Do you-” Then the radio is smashed by a piece of flaming wreckage from the plane.