hey, simple post but im trying to get word out, would like a handfu...

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THE BALLAD OF MR. AFTON

3 months ago

hey, simple post but im trying to get word out, would like a handful of people Very Soon be willing to just look over some writing of my script... im not looking for detailed critique but id like some 👍or👎 feedback on some writing very soon THANK YOU

Im looking for some basically audience testing with people i dont know as well , essentially pre-screening my writing style

for reference the whole script is written like these examples by character initials because that's the way renpy is coded for dialogue

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THANKS ❤️

Im just looking to see if jokes land or what comes off as charming or cringe etc. to know what i should tweak 🧐

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im so tired but it happened miss bunnie "the ballad of mr. afton" was there. I saw them. I met them. proof is in the pudding

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um. so. the thing happened again where I only wanna draw one thing and it's not ballad im sorryy guys... looks around scared.. im craaazyy🤪🤪 ill dig up something on my computer i havent shown and be like wow check it out everyone see how hard im working🤫