8 months ago

Loop [0] - Chapter 0

[I'm not a writer I uhh I don't think will be any good but yeah-

Chapters will be short because posts shouldn't be too long, who would read that-

I feel so bad about this I even struggle to press the post button xDDD]


/ENTRY 0

02.05.2031

A peaceful day. Too peaceful for us to miss an opportunity.

The operation went as expected...Almost.

Before we eliminated our target today, some strange lady got in the way.

Seemed barely trained but very agile.

She temporarily took out 2 of our men with unusual equipment.

Sort of guns that shoot out webs?

Eh, it doesn't seem very effective. She just got us off guard.

We managed to shoot her down and leave the scene, there is no trail we left behind.

Cyber View took care of the cameras, earlier than even needed.

There should be nothing public that could connect us to that lady or the target.

Entry out.

Entry...Gosh is this thing even working?

Maybe I was just talking to myself, whatever really.

Why the heck does he even need these?

*very creative text transition*

/07.08.2037

Evan: (a 30 years old man with dark brown hair, red eyes, a gray t-shirt and bright blue trousers)

It's been 6 years...6 YEARS.

HOW DARE YOU TELL ME YOU HAVEN'T FOUND HER IN ALL THIS TIME?

Policeman:

Sir we're doing our be-

Evan:

NO YOU'RE NOT. And don't pretend like you are.

... (recollecting his thoughts)

I'm done wasting my time here.

*walks further out to a gate at which a police officer stands*

Respectfully, you are of no use officer. (fuck THAT GUY in particular)

*perspective changes to a man with a strange-looking telescope on a far away rooftop speaking with someone via phone*

?: (he's wearing a trench coat and a black mask with a white overlay on his eyes)

Why do we even care boss?

That's just some random guy.

Boss: No one is working on the case. It's not even public.

They marked it off as a mystery in the archives and only lie their way out.

This means that we can close it for good for us as well.

As you know there should have been no witnesses according to our records.

So how does the police know about it?

?:

A person just went missing so it's not big news they know.

Boss: They have information about her murder, not just the fact she is missing.

This means you screwed up and someone was watching.

?:

That's not possible-

Boss: *hangs up*

?:

...

Just more work for me.

*perspective changes to Evan entering an old ran-down house*

Evan:

Eh, it's no use Sophie.

They just aren't searching well enough. That's for sure.

Sophie: (a blonde 24 years old girl with a ponytail, red eyes, her left eye is characteristically darker than the right one, she's wearing torn blue shorts and a green blouse)

Well, did you learn anything new?

Evan: No, nothing. They did not agree to disclose ANY information they've gathered as their suspicions are 'far too vague' at the moment. Ridiculous.

Sophie:

I t-think it makes sense? It's only normal they wouldn't tell you that. Who knows what would get to your head?

*Evan gives his sister a flick on the nose*

Sophie:

Ouch- Quit that!

Evan:

Well, you didn't need to say that.

...

I left a hundred on the table in your room.

Sophie:

Wait- Why don't you at least eat dinner with me?

Evan:

Sorry but I'd like to be left alone for a while.

Sophie:

But-

Evan:

I'll call...alright?

*Evan leaves and walks home*

*perspective changes to a man with a strange-looking telescope on a closer rooftop*

?:

This might be useful.

At that, whoever lives there might be connected to that guy on a personal level.

I have to take care of this before it gets to the boss.

Heck, I'll be fired if the information of her murder spreads.



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