Rewriting The Story:

Firstly, the story of the game. I don't like it though, it is basically about Cuddles getting invited to some random Holiday at Bleaston Hall, and then dreaming about the Inverted coming after him, and if he survives, he is alive, but if the Inverted kill him, then he is dead. But in order to change up the story, The location should be Lumpy Land instead of Bleaston Hall. And instead of the Inverted, it should be The Wraiths and Wraithgod. So basically, Cuddles and his friends are having a blast at Lumpy Land, and all of a sudden, a tiny little Wraith (That being Wraithgod) Enters one of the Electrical Boxes, and blasts a huge Electrical beam into the sky, causing the Wraiths to appear and the sky to go dark and black, and it's up to Cuddles to save his friends from the Wrath of Wraithgod. And it would be a way better story for Happy Tree Horrors

Changing Special Guests:

I know this might be weird, but however, I would have Flumpty be replaced with Maxity. Mainly because of her sweet cuteness and loving personality. But for Flumpty, he is just boring though, if he were to be replaced by someone else, it better be Maxity who would replace him

The Development Of The Game:

The only problem I see here is the lack of progress Happy Tree Horrors has. This shouldn't be some sort of solo project though, but it should be way more different to it's usual development scale in comparison. If you can't do it on your own, just make up your own Dev Team like I do most of the time, so if you had to find some Devs who are interested into working on your game, just ask them if they want to work on the game itself, then they would say yes or no to that, and you would invite them to collaborate on the game. And that would be way better than working on it by yourself

So yeah that's all the Criticism I have for the game though