How can I make this look like those humen anime fan arts?

Its somewhat ready but im getting this message right now....

The brothers

CORYKENSHIN RETURS AFTER THE GAME AWARDS, WHATTT

wise

He is here THE SHOGUN

Do i hear 500 followers and 30k likes pog???????!!??!!

Chatting with a vilager

Momo ^^

Deep dark lore is near (yes i bought it.... it was taking to long what ya gonna do about it)