Wtf is wrong with Dummynation

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I have composed this song!! What do you think?

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I made this song in honor of my recently dead cat. I composed it while I was crying with a lot of inner anxiety. The song is called "Lorca", which was the name of my poor kitten. I hope you like it...

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I have made this song quite sad... What do you think of it?

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