so the notes are done but i realized the story feels a bit too much like undertale meaning predictable to the point of if you playerd undertale you know what is about to happen but i realized i just need to elaborate on some things and these things to be specific are (so slight spoilers)

the various ways mettablook will try to kill you meaning chainsaws bombs magic attack that look like musical notes etc. and how he puts on these shows while constantly judging himself thinking that it's not good enough

the fact that sans isnt just tyranical he is also a murderer

also the fact that papyrus is very much a scammer and will do anything for money

that alphys is more calculated

how undyne is psychotic and will almost never amdit she is wrong

how napstaton puts on musical shows the player shows up and he thinks the player ruined them

how asriel is usually doing things by himself (exept when he is with dess) since his mother barely cares and how he can barely remember his father or his adopted siblings

how toriel blames herself for the deaths of frisk and monsterkid

and how temmie is dealing with her past and the fact she is hiding that she is soulless

all these facts can allow me to create a story that will feel familiar yet different

if anyone has any questions or suggestions please comment