WIPs of all in Story/Writing
Write your Story
(OLD) Chapter 1 Demo/WIP work.
Read this and tell me what you think, I want brutal honesty so please do not humor me.
(also an entry to @Dynocation 
's Contest)
yay got further, idk if i start the next page with this or add it to the one before, it just a really good beggining for the next page i feel like
here is a little wip, but I blank the names out this time, because I felt like it, maybe you can give me a little tip on how to keep going, pretty much "DarkBlue" is going to ask something again but i don't wanna write ""DarkBlue" ask,, right away