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Made bingo with my characters!! (main character and villains)

workin on a timeline for my storyryyyyy (low quality cause spoilers)
I made a fantasy story a while ago, and I wanted to share it finally, I would really like some feedback on it, so if there is anything I should know about it comment it
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UH9tRdRsssGN3pMidwoXW2eZ7qKTā¦

https://www.amazon.ca/Solar-Shock-Rising-Calvin-Woodill-ebook/dpā¦
Looking for a great book then check out my first one that i did a while back!
QnA about my book I'm trying to make, ask anything about it in the comments and I will answer with 100% truth.
If I posted pages of a book Iām working on here would anyone actually read it?
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I feel like writing right now and I know exactly what to write and how to write it but I also at the same time don't feel like writing š