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PS. If u have other game suggestions, please let me review those too 😊
Idk if this is where I should post this. The game was interesting and very engaging. The save point for the third option(part/play/choice part?) was a bit far down the story. May I suggest skipping a few scenes to save time? (The skip function was helpful though :)). The background was almost convincing, but since you're using 2D animation, blurring it out slightly/ lowering the opacity/ or setting a designated hue for flashbacks/POV would be nice to match the characters. The font was kinda plain to be frank, but the size was easy to read. For the emotional parts(?), Italicized formats, use of "", capitalizations or even changing the font color will match the BG music and also facial expressions of the characters. I noticed this was not present in the earlier part of the story, but got included later on. The animals were cute btw 😆. The epic scenes were there. This game was on a landscape format(mobile) and characters were crowding at some points in the story. Perspective maybe? Also the switching of characters part got me confused for a bit. Maybe try, highlighting the characters instead of having the layers forwarded everytime, which may(?) decrease editing time. (Idk, I'm not an expert on that). Yup yup, over all it was fun and engaging. This is my first time playing this kind of game so imma give it a 7/10? Dialogues and scene portrayal could be done better. Aside from that, thank you creators for this wonderful game. Mabuhay so Menandro!!! (I ship this guy 😂)
Hello, I just wanna ask... What application/software did you used to to create this very good game?
Florante and Laura: The Visual Novel is a visual novel adaptation for the known Filipino story, "Florante at Laura" by Francisco Balagtas #visualnovel #textadventure #other