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I played the demo, and I was stoked after seeing this on Kickstarter. The problem though, is the first few minutes where you fall off of the world... yeah that isn't awesome.
The camera gives little depth perception of where your character is going, the menu is zoomed in very close.
It does look superbly awesome though and I will keep an eye on your development.
I gave the demo a shot but didn't finish. The artwork and the overall style is lovely and I think you've done a great job so far with the environments and music. There's a lot of potential here!
My only feedback at this point would be to make sure that you pay just as much attention to the actual gameplay because beautiful graphics don't make up for poor game design. Test the camera controls, general movement, and the physics and timing of jumps.
Give a bit more thought to small details in level design and mechanics. For example, the hub at the start of the demo where you choose a portal, there's no reason the character should be able to fall off the world there. The paths should just be walkable.
The help menu being so detailed is nice, but it's intrusive, especially since it pops up on its own, won't go away unless you click "close", and the gameplay doesn't pause behind it. Something more subtle that doesn't get in the way of might work best.
Also, the screen with the spell tree was lovely! But it's zoomed in so much that you have to click and drag around to see all of it and it's hard to figure out where things are. I don't know if that's intentional or if it's because there were no options for graphics settings.
Regardless, it is a pretty game and I think the game will do well with a little polish. Keep up the good work and good luck with the full game!
AMAZING artwork
Visit the thunderclap page for the link to 0.1.04
https://www.thunderclap.it/projects/59371-neorj
When I go in the first portal, I can't do anything.
I tried changing the games settings but that didn't work.
Project in the genre platformer. The main hero is Heli - a girl who was in the world of fantasy and should release the good spirits. In this it will help the allied spirit, which always protects it. Neli has defensive spells of the elements, and the allied spirit has attack spells. Also our girl can call herself to the aid of fighting creatures, for example: a toy bear will turn into a ferocious bear who will fight in close combat.
During the game we will be able to:
Use more than 40 spells of different elements, with a combination of which will give us combo magic.
Call on your side wild creatures who will help us in melee.
Enjoy unique flora and fauna, unique structures, beautiful views and other things of fantasy world.
Perform not complicated but exciting tasks, solve puzzles that will only please you.
Collect energy elements, being secondary to the game, not required to pass the level.
Exchange the collected elements for additional abilities.
Observe an interesting level system of locations, allowing you to feel the nonlinearity of the game world.
We live on kickstarter! https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1782600607/neorj
Our new demo on the website!
We are trying our best to tell a detailed story of our worlds, history and characters. Our goal is to create the most beautiful 3D platform with its unique atmosphere. We prepared a demo version which includes 'the world of portals', the world of Fire Grass, the first snake villains, and a logical challenger. We attached the demo version here for you to check it out. You can also check YouTube YouTube/Twitch/twitter/Facebook
About us:
Neorj is a team of 2 - game Desiree and a programmer. We've been working on this project for 2 years now. We've prepared a ton of material already, but there's still more to come! Which is exactly why we launched: 'https://www.thunderclap.it/projects/59371-neorj'. Please support us, for us is very important. You can learn more about us in group development.
On the 1st of August we are starting a crowdfunding campaign to collect money to finalize and polish the project.
Contact us:
[email protected]
Thunderclap:
https://www.thunderclap.it/projects/59371-neorj
Facebook:
https://www.facebook.com/NeorjDeveloper
Twitter:
https://twitter.com/NeorjDeveloper
Playable DEMO:
https://yadi.sk/d/F_QHzBDz3Ks2B8
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