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Could be longer, as it's rather short as is.
It could have some soft music rather than just static. (just search Royalty Free Music, Kevin Macleod comes highly recommended)
It could have some actual choices rather than many 'illusion of choice' scenarios.
Lastly, it could have a death mechanic to add some tension.
That's the criticism, but overall it's pretty good as is. 4/5.
This is a classic text based, choose your own adventure game taking place in a different dimention of sorts. In this game, you play as Bella, a girl that has been on the run with a large resistance group against a facist regime of monsters known as The Hierarchy. This game may not look like much, but I'm sure you're gonna find something more to it.
Let me know if there are any problems. Mainly if there are any broken choices or there are spelling/grammar mistakes.
#adventure
