The Dark Room 1 - Test Scene

Its a game with much potential.
The puzzles are very easy. I think its even not a horror game.

This look like it has potential, maybe, can't really tell. Isn't much here...

You should make it more obvious as to how to get rid of the note. Plus, you should just make the note say what it says to the right. Just whip up the note in Photoshop or something, the green clip-art looking note isn't that great, aha.

The light is coming from nothing, you should either add a light source that your character holds like a lantern or flashlight, or you should add something that the light comes out of like a light bulb or something.

Also, you should add some other kind of features that make a game seem polished, that make a game seem better. You should add a menu-- so I can change the sensitivity, gamma, bloom, motion blur, controls, etc. And the ability to crouch, and run. I feel like those types of things really add to the game, but then again don't. They aren't necessary, certainly not at this stage, but take it into consideration. (Maybe a menu for controls and stuff, and exiting the game right now though, aha.)

Since I don't really know anything about the game or the story or anything else, this is all I can really recommend, hopefully I helped. I'll be checking on this game for updates and such, I'll probably write another "review" again once it's updated, and there's more to touch on. Right now, the game doesn't seem to have any kind of game breaking bugs like falling through the floor and stuff like that, so good job and good luck on future releases.

Aster: We're gonna put a menu or something for quiting the game and maybe the screen capture feature, about the save game feature, we don't know yet=/

N3w0ne: Press H to hide the note=)

When you pick up the paper, i touched all the keyboard for taking it off, put above a exit button or something

I think is a good work, i forgot to say on my email that you need to set a menu for quiting the game, maybe with the ESC key or something else, and some feature like take screen captures will be nice too, and of course a save game feature trolololo XD.

Cheers again.