Am I on the right track?

I'm trying to learn how to get down a (similar) art style of the fnaf sexilized games (with my own little spin on it) so I can make a character as a gift to my boyfriend. Does it look alright?

TLDR: I did my first attempt at fan art and mostly failed. Womp womp

For the zero people who were slightly interested in what I made last time, after a week of forgetting about it I finally finished it.

Its still not great, but I leaned £=

Originally gonna ask opinions on another design but it wasn't really fnaf realted enough, so I made this.

Feel free to give opinions, advice, and subjections (just know I'll probably forget gamejolt for about a month then reply).

I added color and outline in Pixlr (an also an alternative color just for fun).

Added a little *dazzle*.

(Idk if people see this too much, but I've learned that posting on Jame jolt let's my things be recognized by Google lens, which I think is cool ദ്ദി)

@XXXMIGUELRXXX

I saw how you asked for Tubert in the Slime 6 art style about a week ago, and sense I was already practicing drawing I decided to make that. Hope you like it ദ്ദി(ᵔᗜᵔ).

Springtrap pins.

I think I did ok £=

Still could work on some things, but I think I'm getting better (=

Heya! I wanted to show some gameplay progress i made so far. I hope you like it ^^

Sometimes the suction cup get sticky. Small animation I made in Blender after doing my tutorial on picking up/dropping objects in animations. Crate model by jQueary (https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/game-ready-sci-fi-crate-d98deca6…).