Hey fellas. What do y'all think about my character designs? Are there any ways I can improve them?

Hotline Miami 2 moment

Thing I made

DONT CALL PHOTO NEGITIVE MOKEUY AT 3 EM!!!!111!!!! (MOKEY CAME TO MYH OUSE) (GONE WRONG!!!11!111!) OSWALD HAS DRIPPP??????///?/?/?/ (HE BROUGHT BOBUX) MICK MICK PUT ME IN A CAN OF SPAGGETTIO'S !!11!!!11!!1!111 (PHOTO NEGATIVE MICKEY LAUCHED THE NUKES) SUS

BREAKING BAD REFERNCE IN BREAKING BAD!??!?!!?!?!?!?!?

OMG I GOT A COPY OF MARIO TAKES A SHOWER THAT WILL BE ANNOUCED IN THE NEXT DIRECT!!1!111!!!!11

GTA 3 Radio Stations

I hate living in San Andreas (Look at the chat box) 😭😭😭😭

I FOUND BON AT 3AM (GONE SEXUAL) (NOT CLICKBAIT)

If you know what this is, then you're awesome