Plz be honest is this better or no?

yo guys am i cookin??? (very wip)

made it better :p

(and fixed the camera to actually be in the center of bf although could be adjusted a bit more ngl)

it came out an hour ago chill damn-

random image i found iz mine now :3

im gettin da hang of v slice lol

(also this song isnt mine i will give the proper credits when im done i swear-)

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what da fu-

first time charting with v slice lol

ngl i wanna become t h i s