Let's start with...
PEOPLE PLEASER

As you can see here, responses 3 to 5, the average being 4. I consider 3 to be a "it's ok i guess." So most folks like it but believe it needs improvement.
This is People Pleaser in question:

In the form, People Pleaser is described as a "robotic doll thing of sorts" with exposed joints that click and grinds as it moves. One thing I did not "draw" here was the fact that two corpses are attached to its back. A soviet captain from the Iron Tide War, and a 9 year old boy who went missing in Chicago. They control it, but so does People-Pleaser itself. I originally wanted the theme of this specific enemy to be "captain thinks it's a war machine, kid thinks it's a toy" but thought it would be a little too generic.
One worthy reply is that the balloon on the redesign was too distracting for the person. And looking back... yeah. I really had no idea what I was going with that. The original idea was to be pretty much this "1992 Dakin Clifford The Big Red Dog With Clown Costume" as I thought it would fit the "People Pleaser" name. I kind of screwed that up. Woops.

Bugīūman (Placeholder)

Okay, I admit; I just gave up entirely. Silent Hill F got me. I'm too poor to play it and research its themes.
The idea for Bugīūman is that (completely unrelated to F) she is a young Japanese woman who was tricked by a doomsday cult disguised as a meditation class. If you don't get what it's referencing here, it's the Aum Shinrikyo. Best I can describe them is a crazy cult believing there will be war against the United States and Japan, and everybody else who isn't in said cult is not going to heaven.
Yes. The Tokyo Subway sarin attack WAS going to be mentioned in OHH's storyline, and this is where she came from. Now, this being a ROBLOX game that I intend to be accessible to all without extreme gore and whatso have you, I HAD to kiddify her. Is ROBLOX gonna ban me for having her poison people? Just because others do it and they didn't get slapped in the face and their wallets taken doesn't mean it's allowed. I have make to sure.
I'm the only designer and writer on this game, and I don't think anyone seems interested unless you want JRWells from DREADWALKER back. Which I doubt anyone is interested in joining us anymore. I mean... come on. Have you seen the amount of canceled games? Do they take a gamble if their work is gonna be worth it or be trashed just because one of the guys had a crash-out and deleted everything for no reason and it only made me angry? Or be moved to another game? I have fought tooth and nail to get any artists or anyone new to the team. I always turn up empty.
I'm gonna begin asking to friends who are popular or have a decent following "Can you tell people to apply for my form?" at this point. Which sounds desperate. And I am desperate.
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