5 years ago

Critique time!

I'm looking for feedback from you regarding my art because I want to improve more!

Please, if you have the time, give me constructive criticism. It can be as small as a few sentences, or as large as a paragraph.

More in the article:


Go ahead and critique my art in the comments (either on that post or over here. If posting here, just specify which piece you're critiquing)

Please remember that critique does NOT equal hate. Don't just say you dislike a piece of art because you don't like furries or something.


Every piece of art is open to critique, but I encourage you to take a look at my newer pieces because they're the most relevant ones.

If you want me to just tell you what to critique, let me know.


Feel free to share this post too. The more who see this post the better :3

Thank you in advance!



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