Plz be honest is this better or no?

ngl i wanna become t h i s

what da fu-

Guess what i worked on during the car ride :3333

(theres some notes i need to fix its hard to chart in a car ok-)

yo guys am i cookin??? (very wip)

Wippers

first time charting with v slice lol

im gettin da hang of v slice lol

(also this song isnt mine i will give the proper credits when im done i swear-)

Repost cuz I forgot community's 💔

another bot spotted