https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rVegBK_WfhtRUM-h_hyxlZOH1qvFsj-HHXW6cbL2S4Y/edit?usp=sharing
I am not really happy with how it turned out. (Comments are enabled here so that people can give me feedback.)
While yeah, the rewritten story is done, I'm not done yet though, as I plan to reread the original X's 2011 story, two other stories relating to him (It is not the 2017 remake.) and attempting to do research more on the original's world and all that type of stuff so that way I can take what I find either interesting or what I like about it, so that way I can redo this story.
Take care all, I won't be abandoning other stuff, just that I am going to try to balance things out.
You can also try suggesting me other (Actually good and not poorly written like this.) CreepyPasta stories and maybe I'll take inspiration from them.
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