You will ask yourself, who are you? I will answer you, my name is rase although you can call me R, I was a friend of Fliren for some time and what we could talk about turns out he had not written a story for colorful, he only had the idea of the game and started development, so I made my own version of colorful, the idea was to present the story to Fliren in order to revive the project, but honestly I don't think he gave me permission, mainly because I made an insane amount of changes, for example instead of having 3 girls there are 5, But I didn't want this story I made to sink and never get told, so here it is.
section 1-descriptions of the characters, read first before reading section 2.
Name: Geder Col(spoiler) (Red)
Age: Between 19-21 Years
Moves: Her attacks would have been based on ASDW mechanics, she would use a bat of baseball
Favorite food: oranges
Likes: being the leader
The most hated: that people do not listen to their orders
Description: she always wants to be the leader, and she will do everything to be it
Name: Anais Ramirez (Green)
Age: Between 19-21 Years
Movements: he has almost no attacks, he would have applied mostly effects such as Rage, Taunt, Flustered, among others, he would also have a movement similar to Flash, but he would also have applied Blind since Green has piercings on his nipples
Favorite food: hot sauce
Likes: music
The most hated: the rules
Description: She is rebellious and all she wants is for her father to listen to her music
Name: Jennifer Holson (Yellow)
Age: Between 19-21 Years
Movements: you use his fists, he also has an attack where he hugs his opponents and they suffocate, (you know how they suffocate them) don't call me a pervert, Fliren was the one who designed the character, it was this or use the redesigns
Favorite food: brownies
Likes: drawing and the costumes
The most hated: having to organize their things
Description: She is very big and likes to spend time with her friends
Name: Carey Soren (Perpul)
Age: Between 26-28 Years
Movements: Use the old trick of spray cans and a lighter
Favorite Food: Does tobacco count as food?
Likes: smoking
Most hated: love movies
Description: An infertile woman who fulfills a maternal role
Name: Amy Mahone Jr. (Blue)
Age: Between 10-12 Years
Moves: use black magic
Favorite food: chocolate
Likes: reading
The most hated: the sun and spend much time in a place other than home
Description: She has a book of black magic that by the time she got to the shelter was already there.
Name: Ray Minier (Orange)
Age: Between 19-21 Years
Moves: Uses a bunch of trinkets that he pulls out of his sweater.
Favorite food: muffins
Likes: harassing people
Most hated: gangs
Description: a guy who seems to be omnipresent, because he always appears out of nowhere
Name: Boddy (Misspelling is intentional) Van Jahs (Brown)
Age: 26-28 Years
Movements: you use his fists, and that's it
Favorite food: anti depressant pills
Likes: acting like a woman
The most hated: that he refers to him as a man
Description: A ex lovelies who due to trauma thinks she is a woman
section 2-the history
everything starts in a flashback, where our protagonist (red) where she would meet some friends (green and orange), and then cut
and now the scene focuses on some joy boys, they are taking red while she is asleep, and the one who is apparently her dead brother lying on the ground, after a short walk the joy boys arrive at a warehouse, there red wakes up and she meets green again, but she is not alone but she is accompanied by three other girls (yellow, blue and purple), 12 years later, the girls are discussing what will be outside and suddenly one of the joy boys mutates, and then green and yellow They take advantage of this to escape.
red- what the hell are you doing.
green- red I don't want to spend everything in this warehouse, I just want to explore the rest of the world.
red - but the rest of the world is dangerous.
green- I don't care, I just want to get out!
purple- enough of arguing, we can make an agreement, they can go out but your red will have to escort green and yellow, I will stay taking care of blue because he is too young to be able to defend himself abroad
red- ok
(this is where red gets his baseball bat)
this is where the game starts, get ready for a round of summarized zones:
the surroundings: it is a very windy paramo,
area 1: forest with some small towns, at the end there is a fork to two Areas.
side of the fork: it's a paint factory, there's a gang called "painting mens".
down side of the fork: it is a cave where there is a gang called "xia fraternity"
lake of the night: regardless of the path you have chosen, you will always reach this place without enemies, here orange would reappear and red would change to its form 2
Now back to the story:
our trio of girls arrives in what seems to be the territory of a gang,
green-red, i think we're in gang territory
yellow - I don't think they can cause us problems
??? - Hey Babys
*the girls turn around to see who said that*
randy Cooper- perhaps you are the much sought after girls
*none of them answer*
Cleveland- I would not go with such confidence as long as they are women, they could be transvestites
Randy Cooper- well, they look too real to be... motherfucking, they're gone
green-red i think i fell in love
red- *face palm*
the next morning, the girls realize that they have discovered their lair, but far from what one thinks, they treat them really well, or well just green, even those who called themselves "the masked boys" had a station radio where green could upload his music for everyone to listen to, all this show of kindness is very suspicious, so red and yellow are in charge of putting up a barricade with garbage that they found around, but the next morning, green does not she was, and when they went looking for her, it turns out that all the members of "the masked boys" were trying to keep red and yellow from reaching randy's shack, and when they arrive...
green- I can explain.
red- this was the kind of situation we had to avoid.
green- oh sorry.
red- I will not forgive a whore!
randy cooper- who's calling you a whore.
*randy Cooper is hit hard in the stomach with a bat*
red- die damn pervert!
*before red can attack randy, yellow takes her out of the shack*
Yellow-red, you're going too far.
Red- understands that that guy just wanted to take green to bed!
Yellow- but if he and his gang don't seem like bad people, this might be the safe place we were looking for.
Red- well, if you want to stay here, then... stay here and don't go looking for me!
*Red runs off a cliff and jumps off, falling into a very deep lake*
and here the gang known as "extreme dynasty" will appear for the first time
you would have a fight which you could not win and they would take you to their base, and Red being alone with ajdem xatem, and after that cut,
1 month later, Red became a sex doll but alive, those of "extreme dynasty" take turns doing their acts and when they finish and so that they don't try to escape they give him joy pills, but suddenly.
*strange noises coming out of a hatch*
Red - ...
* Blue comes out of the hatch*
Blue - Red! Why are you here.
Red - …
Blue - why are you quiet, oh I see?
purple - I know a lot of dark things have happened and I'm sure they're having an emotional reunion, but I'm going to reaffirm my role as a mother by entering anyway
after that scene , our girls would try to escape from the "extreme dynasty" base but when our girls reach the exit, the leader (george xanadu) and his bodyguard (ajdem xatem) are blocking the exit.
george xanadu- i cant believe my men got ripped to shreds by a girl
Bule- and what did you expect, you leave me a book of black magic.
ajdem xatem- I didn't expect that trinket to actually work.
Bule- let's stop talking, I already want to go
after a fight
Red- what happened
Purple- red! I'm glad you regained consciousness
Red- oh, finally they are dead
Bule- I'm glad what they did to you didn't affect you so much... well, let's go
but when the girls leave the base, they find orange who is dead
Red- oh, my poor friend
*red kisses orange's corpse on the mouth and then throws up because he realizes he's kissing a corpse*
Bule - I think that did affect him
after that moment you would arrive at (the disteris city) a city led by the robotic knights, a gang made up of robots and having Garibaldi as a leader, it is said that they are strong as a leader, it is said that they are strong as buzzo and his men, they also have a ship in their possession and plan to colonize an island that it is believed that only women are there.
but that's worth cheese, because our girls and a former lovelies (Brown), beat them and steal their boat (if that's a summary)
but back to the story:
after a long journey, our girls and ex lovelies arrive on the island and decide to explore,
but when Red arrives at a plaza, he begins to hallucinate for taking joy.
???- Hello daughter
Red- who are you, and why do you call me daughter
*the mystery man lowers his hood*
Columbo- I came back from buying milk
Red- I have no memories of you, all my life I lived with my mother and my brother
???- that's because he abandoned us
???- we thought that if we said you that it would affect you in the future
Red- who are you, and why do you know so much about my past
*the 2 mysterious guys lower their hoods*
Mother- it's been a long time without seeing you, dear
Jeremy- you really have grown enough
Red- mom!, Jeremy!
*Red runs out to hug the hallucination of his mother, but the hallucination disappears*
Red- no, mommy, nooooo! *Begin to cry*
???- forgive me for interrupting your misfortune, but you would be interested in joy
Red- who are you, although I am interested in the joy
???- my name is harold holson, but you can call me doctor HH, and about joy just follow me
Red - ok
*doctor HH takes Red to his cave*
doctor HH- now sit on the stretcher, now I'm going to take out a little of…, because your legs are open
Red- what are you waiting for just do it
doctor HH- no, no, no, I was just going to draw your blood
*Red gets up from the stretcher*
Red- disgusting
* Red grabs doctor HH by the neck *
Red- why did you want my blood?
doctor HH- for personal consumption, stupid
*doctor HH bites Red*
Red- aaaaaaaaaah!
*doctor HH is hides in his safe but drops the key that opens the door that keeps the boxes with joy*
Then the action focuses on the other three characters (bule, purple, Brown) they arrive at the cave of doctor HH, and find the latter turned into a joy mutan, but instead of attacking our group, he ignore our protagonists, and just creeping in awe into the distance, our girls and the ex-lovelies go into the cave and find Red taking an insane amount of joy pills.
Bule- Red you're fine
*doesn't answer, then mutates*
8 months later, apparently our protagonists are fine.
*sobs heard in the distance*
Purple- Let's see what makes those sounds
The only thing they find is a baby with brown skin and red hair.
(if there are any grammatical errors don't notify me, I only had 2 days to write this)
section 3-conceptual art
here are a lot of doodles of characters to which I did not make a sprite for not being very important:
the joy boys from the beginning of the game
the NPCs of the first 2 areas, sorry for the bad art, in later entries it will get better
these lazy assholes
and his paint-addicted counterpart
other members of the masked boys
the Xs represent where the enemies would be located
some of them look like blizzard workers (i think i went too far with that joke)
and here you have george xanadu, I didn't find a sprite of him in normal size
inhabitants of disteris, just as badly drawn as those of the first areas
robots, who made them, what does it matter
the text says it all
the cave of doctor HH
and with that this post ends, the original colorful is from Fliren, if he wants me to delete this, then I will delete this post, I will be waiting for your questions, and see you next June 6
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