1 year ago

Hot Take: Foane’s Design [From ZET] is too Human in Design.

Hear me out... [In the Article below]


I just find Foane to be too Human like, like she looks more like a Human then an actual Darkner.

Darkners can be Humanoid to be clear, but have something that majorly makes them not Humane, like different Heads or Body Structure. Foane is drawn just too Human like, she just doesnt feel like a Darkner, but more like a Human with Darkner Features.

Point Number 1: Her Face looks a bit too Human with just Big Empty Eyes and a Gaping Mouth. Making her seem more like a Human just having a Frozen, dead Face. Number 2: Her Body, while cool in Theory, just doesnt really work as I think Zet did. The Black Circles/Holes on her Lower Skirt look wrong, i know its like one of these Vintage Phones where you put your Finger in to choose a Number (Thinking about this with Foane is already wrong), so yeah... but at least the Wire/Loose Plug is cool.

I get it: She looks Uncanny like that, but Story wise I never picked up any: She is Human like because -Reason here-, she is always like that, which already feels like an Oversight. Jevil and Spamton are also not entirely Human, so why is Foane so Human in appearence?

I am not calling ZET a Bad Artist or Terrible Creator, but i do think that Foane lacks the Deltarune feel most Characters have in the Game. Even those Humanoid like Queen have at least something that makes them look not too Human.

For Helel Its more fitting because (What i heard Theory wise) is somewhat like a representation of "Kris's Human Mother" and also her Design, as an [Humanoid] Angel, makes her feel more like a Darkner.

Same for Occazio, because of his Backstory and Power, justifying him being a Darkner despite Human look. Both Helel and Occazio it just works.

Its probebly just me with that Opinion. But I needed to get it out, call it Wrong or False my Opinion, but I just dont find Foane's Design Fitting enough. Maybe ZET is aware of that, but idk, please leave your Opinions below! (I may also rewrite or take this down later if I feel like this isnt a good Take or if i didnt made myself clear)



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