cool wip that got lost

Can you help me with advice to make it look cooler

Girl

2011x

Ice cream in hellhole redo

I've been drawing a little during my short break. Here's some of what I've done. Some of it is for a fnf mod I'm working on.

Vo

The glow up is crazy

"Some place from Peppa Pig"

Fanart for @notkitsuneZ

Can you guys come up with a name for this guy?