I'm looking for feedback for my dream video game project: Ju'maze the Jag'zara

I've written a summary about the games plot. It would mean a lot to me for anybody to give it a read and tell me any thoughts on it. Thank you 😊

I'm redoing them again 😄

Made a ref sheet for her lol

Sonic jp shading style practice on my lil girl

Lol

She heated

Panel 03

Hey guys I have this short summary that I wanted to share with everyone. This is just a basic story plot I had for a video game I wanna make in the future. Feedback would really help 👍

Unfinished over world concept art

It's Ju'maze again! And he's rocking a new style. 😎🐆