Oribou styled art test

I'm asking nicely. Give me what I want. I'll ask politely. Give me what I want. /lyr

A drawing of Gou Kirimi from the hit Japanese RPG game MARIKINonline4 as a mermaid

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An attempt at shading and highlights, any advice on how to improve would be appreciated The character used is Gou Kirimi from MARIKINonline4

yeah should be good

This will be my fate

Canon, totally

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ywk Gamejolt can have this image, as a little treat