Hi, How can I improve?

Natsuki

Ralsei

Chocolate

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Frisk

Sayori...Again

J U S T S A Y O R I

sorry if there are mistakes, i'm a novice cartoonist

Heya there! I really wanted to show you all a little gameplay preview of the first boss fight i'm currently working on i hope you like it ^^

Today I was setting up the location of the first boss. His name is "Father" and he is the first of the Patagonians. His task is to guard the road to the House.🛡🗡 Bookmark pre-launch page🔖🔖🔖

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/rdvindiegame/the-patagonian…