Unfinished over world concept art

I'm looking for feedback for my dream video game project: Ju'maze the Jag'zara

I've written a summary about the games plot. It would mean a lot to me for anybody to give it a read and tell me any thoughts on it. Thank you 😊

Hey guys I have this short summary that I wanted to share with everyone. This is just a basic story plot I had for a video game I wanna make in the future. Feedback would really help 👍

@MimiiPyon is a Jolter to Watch and a Sonic fan artist / part-time Vtuber! Follow MimiiPyon before the quest ends on March 18 and you'll get Coins!

Hopefully in the future, this can be real

@TheGamingGoru is a Jolter to Watch and artist who loves making fun cartoon and video game art! Follow @TheGamingGoru before the quest ends on April 29 and you'll get Coins!

I'm back, forgot to post this yesterday

I don't think you'll survive that ☠️

Happy Retro Video Game Day!

Celebrate your favorite retro game by completing our quest.

It'll be in your quest log until March 10th.

Sonic jp shading style practice on my lil girl