EDIT : @ObscureEasterEgg made some suggestions and I moved the eyes down a bit, and moved the blush up a bit, and I think it looks a lot better

Ngl, I feel like the face was better in the sketch, but I don't know. Maybe I'm wrong.

Like- this art should be great, I should love it, but I'm just not feeling it anymore for whatever reason.

The shading is great, the anatomy is at least improving, and- Like, there's so many reasons to like this picture, but I'm just not feeling it for whatever reason.

Maybe I'm just being picky tho- I dunno.