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Yall remember 14th verse and how I made a piece of art for that Arctic guy before? I realised I never actually showed some progress on what the story is like now, so lemme fill you in on that! Also have some more Arctic


14th Verse post 2, here we go. Nothing flashy cause I'm still sick. I dunno why I keep talking about big projects whenever I am sick, cause I did the same thing with the FNaW Iceberg that Iaon posted a while back. But that's not the point, this is 14th Verse time.

Quick fill in over what 14th Verse is for the new fans; 14th Verse is my own Dragon Ball continuity where Zeno doesn't destroy all 18 Universes. Fruppet gets some lore, he gets a wife and becomes friends with a bunch of random guys, including Kirbious.


Page Count Update

Let's start with the page count update, which uh...

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Yeah it's gone up by... a bit.

So, when I was writing the Arc up to the Hound's Pride Arc, the first arc of the Howling Hunters Saga, I was going about it fairly casually. It wasn't super detailed, there wasn't too much added world-building, it was all very simple. Then came that Arc and I was like "ya know what. imma start writing entire f*cking essays". And so I did just that! Page 21 is literally the beginning of that arc, and it was getting longer from there.


Well, what's new then?

Well, besides 2 more arcs in the Howling Hunters (including the introduction of 2 other Saiyans, The Arctic Empire and Kirbious), we have 1 more Saga added onto the Dragon Ball portion; The Kirbious Saga. Kirbious kinda acts like the Piccolo Daimao of this section, except he doesn't split off via eggtosis and gets to live life peacefully with a harpy. I'm not even kidding, Kirbious uses his own DNA to have a kid with said harpy (NOT IN THAT WAY YOU FRICKS. Kirbious doesn't even have a-)

Fruppet even ends up getting married!

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Wait Fruppet pulled a woman? Yeah, Tani. I've mentioned her a fair bit at this point, even making some art for her that yall have seen. She's a moth girl, meaning she does have wings underneath her shirt. She can like... retract or hide them and then release them when she needs to fly. And before you ask, yes I accounted for the fact that the shirt would rip if she was to release her wings when wearing a shirt. She's got a special bra that allows her to fly without uh... well... ya know.

Moving on, theres a timeskip of 4 years, where Kirbious has that said child, Fruppet gets married, Fruppet and Tani train because Fruppet used to be a robot and doesn't have any way of reproduction and Fruppet wins another tournament. Then another Saiyan shows up and Dragon Ball Z starts.

It's pretty much just a direct reflection of main DBZ; Saiyan arrives, "Hey you're a Saiyan", audience shock, Saiyan from Space dies, Fruppet doesn't die, but Kirbious and Tani go to train with a God beyond God, other two Saiyans show up, they kill God, Fruppet and Kirbious fight the pRiNcE oF sAiYaNs Chife whilst Gulak and Bass die to Scall, the other Saiyan.

The Saiyans are defeated (both live, this is important) and decide "ya know what, we want to beat up Arctic, wanna help" and Fruppet, Kirbs and Tani are like "bet" and they go to beat up Arctic in his ship. Travels commence, they meet a guy that Kirbious saved one time, they blow up the ship a lil' bit, Arctic shows up and kills Chife and Tani, Fruppet's pissed, he goes Super Saiyan, kills Arctic and then goes to a planet called Ratdray, where he learns instant transmission. He goes back to earth and finds out Scall got freaky with Leap, the person who Fruppet saw as his sister all this time, and those two are a thing now with a kid. Scall and Fruppet showcase Super Saiyan whilst Chife has an existential Biker crisis because Scall was like "F*ck you, I aint listening to a non-prince anymore" and gets a personality similar to Biker Raditz from Salad Saiyan.

Ya get all that? Good, cause it's TIME TO TALK ABOUT TRANSFORMATIONS!


Transformations, wow what a shocker

I mean, it's Dragon Ball, what do you expect? 14th verse or not, they define that show.

Right now we have... well lets talk about the Saiyans first I guess since that'll be easier.

Saiyans:

So, as you know, we have 3 and a half Saiyans right now who are alive:
Fruppet - The Main Character and the only Saiyan who has Tenkonian DNA.
Chife - The 14th Universe's Prince of all 3 and a half Saiyans. Currently having an existential crisis because of the other normal Saiyan clowning on him berating him.
Scall - Said normal Saiyan who clowned on Chife for acting like a prince. The only Saiyan with a tail.
Soko - The child of Leap and Scall. Is like 6 months old at the current point in the story. Kinda just there rn.

All 3 Saiyans who aren't literal babies have the Ikari / Wrathful form, first unlocked by Fruppet before his first fight with Chife and Scall. Fruppet is weaker in the form than Chife and Scall due to the Lazaru only being an 8 times boost instead of a 10 times boost, and none of them get a power advantage during the battle from adaptation, however this form would quickly be overshadowed by Chife and Scall.

Scall was the first to unlock this next form, Wrathful evolved, which is just a Wrathful version of SSJ2. Fruppet doesn't get it because of the bulkiness of the form. He prefers his stick figure body... which I guess is just his entire character.

Then, we of course have Super Saiyan, which differs between the three. Chife is just normal Super Saiyan, cause he isn't special. Scall gets a slightly larger boost of about x55 because he still has his tail! Is this just a potential chance for me to introduce Super Saiyan 4 into the 14th Verse lore? Absolutely! Will I call it Super Saiyan 4? Probably not (I'll get into that when I make it). Fruppet is the strongest in the form, with a boost of x75. Tenkonian Super Saiyan as I call it has a much more golden yellow color to it:

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Kinda like that. I see normal Super Saiyans (AKA Saiyans without Tenkonian DNA) as having the same shade of yellow as Goku did in the Namek Saga:

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As you can see with Scall here. TSSJ also is much more golden because of the rage required in the form, making it much more difficult to control.

To put the amount of rage you need into perspective, remember back when I made a post about Fruppet and Kirbious during their tournament match, and how Fruppet was holding a weird orb of energy in his hands? That was the first of his own moves, the Shogun Shot, an attack that he made out of desperation and anger because Kirbious was a d*ck back then and was gonna blow up the planet. Take that rage level and turn it up to about 300%, cause that is definitely what he was feeling when he realises Arctic was the main cause of all of the crap he's had to deal with since Age 752.

Kirbious:

I'm not gonna go into every copy ability of Kirbious', but I will discuss how his stuff works. Yes, he uses copy abilities just like Kirby does. However, he also has access to evolved variants of those abilities, the ULTRA IN- I-I mean Abilities. Ultra Abilities. Like Ultra Sword? Except instead of it being limited to like 5 or 6 abilities (scrapped ones included) it's like all of them.

Cool :]


Anyways, Imma wrap up there. I'm tired, ill and slowly but surely exploding... that's it. Oh! Actually! Before I go! It's time for something big. Something so radically different on the page that you've never before seen before. Something so wacky, that I don't think you'll be able to handle it!

Are ya ready?

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I'm not a Puppet anymore :]

Fruppet isn't an animatronic anymore, nor is he a robot. He's Fruppet! I'm Fruppet!

I aint no puppet!

Alright that's all ok bye :]



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