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This is a funny game. There is a lack of player choice, but, oh well, it fits perfectly as an interactive story. Like all Twine games, I tend to enjoy them, and this was no exception. I really enjoyed this. I proved to be quite fond of this game. Oh, btw, it takes more than 10 seconds : reading the text. But oh well, 3/5

Heh, not bad. I thought it was pretty great! 3/5

Poignant, but I agree with Nimble - would have liked a degree of player choice.

Interesting experience. Kind of gives nondevelopers a taste of what a game has to go through before it's trashed, let alone released. My only problem is that it doesn't really fit any definition of a game. It could have just been a short blog post or something.