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This is awesome. Those timed sentences worked remarkably well at creating tension and atmosphere. Almost like getting the story read to you :)

Wow. Just wow. I think of all the games I've played so far, this one felt the most atmospheric and scary too me. You just nailed it. The writing is superb, even better is the fact that the pacing for the words made it all the better and more expressive. I liked that you added some extra details that we could click on if we felt like it before delving into the actual call. I liked all of the endings (hopefully got them all). Replayed about 4-5 times or so just to see what would happen next! The single question I have is quite literally, the number. Is is 1-999-9999? or 999-9999? Or, as you wrote during that part, 1-999-999? So many different 9's!

Overall? Fantastic, definitely gonna review this one in my blog later :)

This game made me hungry at first <_<

I felt legitimately apprehensive to continue at a point. Some sound at opportune points would've really driven it home >:3 That was some really great build-up and timing.

SPOILERS!! (maybe) I think I got all the endings, but to be honest they felt a bit disconnected from the story, save for maybe the closet one, but I'm just going to assume it's a bad end no matter what I do after calling the hotline? How come everyone else lived to post about it on the internet, or am I just supposed to assume they all posted right away and then were dragged into an inky void etc.? The dream sequence if you chose not to call was silly. I would love a more definitive conclusion either way though if you ever come back to this, I was really getting into the story! Criticism aside, I really enjoyed this, great writing ^_^

Creepy twine. I included it in part 2 of my Asylum Jam Compilation video series, if you would like to take a look :) http://youtu.be/WZQsMOO2E5A

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