Sailfish Final Talus

the game is fine but the plot is heavy-handed. the first chapter is alright and is engaging enough, but the second chapter's plot is kinda weird - who's the guy that was testing the mic when ava and lucas came into the room? where the hell is jeff? what's up with the records? wtf is going on?

don't take my criticism too harshly but the plot could be better. for example, when ava and lucas look at the photo you could insert some picture or a screenshot from the game that fits the photo's description. when ava and lucas enter the records room, it would be good to explain what's it used for and why is it important.

another thing is that the punctuation is very much lacking - i think that if you improved it the game would be much better and the plot wouldn't be so confusing lol))))

yeah all in all this is a project i have some hopes for. capw1ng, i hope you'll listen to my advice and improve on the plot and spelling\grammar\punctuation so that the game will move from being good to very good. cheers.

just played through the first and the second chapter and i have to say that this is a pretty good continuation of the original SailFish game!) the story is definitely improved, the new environments are all great and the music is on-point! although, i wish the second chapter also had some music in the background...

my only two complaints is that, firstly, there are no fights in both the first and the second chapter - think it would be cool to give the players the ability to confront and fight Jeff in the first chapter and have some minions in the second chapter to try and stop Lucas and Ava! secondly, i think it would be good to make the player able to enter the cave in the first chapter from any point around it, not just from the top - but those are minor things. still, if you could polish them a bit more then the game would be a lot better!)

overall, this is a pretty good continuation of the first game with lots of improvements and some room for even more improvement!) the plot is engaging and interesting, the game works fine - i haven't found a single bug while playing it, and the cutscenes look very nice - especially the opening one with the rain!) all in all, Capw1ng, i'll look forward to more chapters being released for the game and i hope it gets better and better with each update!) good luck and take care!