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The VN is not so bad. It's alright in my opinion. But you can start a story where he has to recruit reinforcemments to take back the village or have revenge. He can have adventures and ends up making friends with enderman, zombie, skeleton, etc. I don't know, it's you choice. Just want to give some advice if you plan to make another one.
The fact that it was short, it was pretty sad, I hoped it'd be 20mins longer. I made a let's play on it, I hope ya don't mind. :)
What's up?
This is the First game I have ever made on Ren'py. Actually, this is the first VN (Visual Novel) i have ever tried to make. Don't give it to much hate or be to harsh when judging it, but some feedback would be nice in case i ever tried to make any more of these kinds of games.
The game itself is kinda short considering i just thought up a story on the spot, mainly because i wanted to just see how well I could do on my first one, so like I said feedback would be nice...
Also one more thing...The game is named An Unusual Encounter, but the file itself is called "My first visual novel" so if your trying to find it, that's what it will be called.
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I am ATTEMPTING to make something better...
