Coma - The Dream Begins

In addition to this, I'm a stickler for proper grammar, but I won't let it affect my review of this game. The concept is one I haven't seen before and I especially like the feeling that not only the player doesn't know what's going on, but the main character also is confused by these events.

Now for some constructive criticism:
I felt that the ECG pulse was moving too fast for the player to keep up with which made going through the simplest obstacles challenging. I also did not like that the crystal spike things appeared out of nowhere when the pulse moved over them. I would have preferred a way to warn the player in advance that a spike was coming up (perhaps by fading it in quickly when the pulse was on it and then fading it out slowly after the pulse revealed it). You also didn't name the spikes something that would make sense to the story which was upsetting to me, but probably not detrimental to the game itself.

Other than that, I think it's a good concept and with a little bit more work, it can become a great game.

Interested to see where this will go

whats with all the locked levels at the end? there's no other exit

It's not the best. I honestly thought it would be better than THIS.