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What do you think?

Okay so a bit of constructive criticism. The story was good. I enjoyed it. But it moved entirely too fast. I feel like the story needs to be fleshed out more and it needs to take longer to get from beginning to end. Also I feel like you should add the ability to make certain choices. Whether or not to help the humans escape, whether or not you fight for Faustas or change sides to fight for the King, etc. I did like the choice at the end of the game. Leaving or staying. I chose to stay because it was clear to me that she didn't TRULY want to leave. As I said I enjoyed the game, and I'm looking forward to more of it. Nothing negative to say about it on my part. Just a bit of advice and friendly suggestions. :) Keep up the good work!

A normal high school girl is abducted and brought to the war-torn and magical Land of Wars to fight in an arena for her life. Why was she brought there?
And will she be able to go home ever again? Find out!
#rpg



mature
Mild Cartoon Violence
Mild Fantasy Violence
Sexual Violence
Alcohol Reference
Suggestive Themes
Mild Language
Comical Shenanigans
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