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The only problem I noticed was that at the beginning when the cat was talking he said "Poor sould left to wonder the" and cuts off. I dont know if this was intentional or not but if it is, try adding a ... at the end so the reader knows you meant to do that. If not plz fix. Otherwise great game keep it up!

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Okay, so I have some questions, critiques, and compliments. (WARNING: long post)

First off, I've never had such a smooth experience with an HTML5 game (or really any browser game), so kudos! The graphics are intriguing and very simple which I adore.

Next, I am curious as to late in the "green" section (the second level), when you get to the point after the Flappy Bird-esque. what exactly are you suppose to do? I understand the first set you use the umbrella to push up against the block then float down, but on the next set you can't make the jump without the umbrella. Your acceleration is just too fast with the umbrella.

Lastly, like everyone here I really think checkpoints should be implemented, possibly at a specific looking flower or grave type? The umbrella mechanic is great, but with the fans (as said above) the acceleration is just a bit too fast to get past that passage. The spike mechanic is fine as is, but it acts in that if you are pixel next to pixel you die, rather than a collision with it (so even if I stop, if my character lands right next to the pixel of the spike I die). This isn't necessarily bad but it does make more difficult.

EDIT: I almost forgot, you need to have SOMETHING that indicates to the player what the controls are. If I hadn't seen the description that an umbrella was being used, I wouldn't have button spammed to find it. Even if it's just something simple as a graphic on the title screen, it would help.

I did end up doing gameplay of it, and the video will be out 11/14 here:
https://youtu.be/1qhiJb0JNiA
All in all I really did enjoy this game and hope to see more come of it!

CHECKPOINTS! Sorry, wanted to get your attention. But really, as the difficulty ramps up, we will need some checkpoints or this will get frustrating.

As for the gameplay, I like it. Using the umbrella to suspend yourself over the block that fall to sych up to the eyes is a really interesting concept. More of that would be cool.

Really interesting. Would love to see more.

made a lets play so far two parts might make a third one
part 1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iafG8LsiG1c
part 2 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NTi5LT0Hut4