Sky Eye

Thoughts
The only good thing about this is the mapping. i couldn't even consider the plot with the atrocious amount of grammar mistakes.
the dialog for this needs a lot of work!

Overall
might have potential with a better writer

Random Thoughts
A Major mistake in the intro shattered immersion. at first it is telling it from your characters perspective.
saying have "you" or "your" the character see things. but then it switches to "he" "him" and "himself"
meaning someone else.

Really beautiful mapping

he can't reach the mirror but that makes no sense. just climb something

Grammar needs improvement

the childs diary was annoying how many times does he have to say i was locked in my room?
or i do not want to sleep here.

pathing mistakes

no saving...

I really liked the demo.Hope to see a full game soon!

Please finish this game...i love the setting so far and cant wait to play it when your done. Good Work

Made a Lets Play on my channel
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r06FfWHv1Kk&feature=youtu.be

Let me Know when the full version is coming out, i would love to try it out!
Nice Story and Game Concept! Lookin forward to the full version!