The world I created, that I hated

The graphics look polished and nice, with a depressing and post apocalyptic tone to it. It seems that there are some grammar errors, but that is okay. The game looks and feels decent.

Wow... This is kinda sad.
The gameplay is not good but this more close to an "art game".

nice depressive game. Need a bit more work, but i understand the fact that it was done in a jam. Its not really challenging

Ahm, it's a good short experience, the sound could have been better as it becomes really loud at times. Love these little kind of platformers/interactive fiction. Polishing this up may result in a very interesting game in all respects.

Very interesting - I love little conceptual games like this. It's been said before, but check for typos - check your commas and other punctuation. If you're going to use punctuation creatively, that's fine. Just be consistent with it. I also agree sound effects could help a lot. Check out http://www.bfxr.net/ for some easy sound effect creation. Graphics looked nice, though it was unclear at times what I could or couldn't interact with (gears don't kill me, lava does) - maybe the non-colliding game objects could be a lighter gray? Speaking of lava, the story doesn't make that much sense that you have to try over when you die in lava but not at the end ... maybe instead of dying in lava, you fall down a pit and have to climb back out. Keep up the cool work!