ToriStory

i had this idea for an undertale creepypasta about a demo of undertale, where you lived with toriel instead of continuing to the ruins exit as expected, there would be an in-game cutscene of years passing by, living with toriel, and frisk getting older as well, with weird creepy music and visuals coandsiding with it (implying to do a genocide run). after the cutscene, you return to frisk, its night, and you are now given the option to continue to the exit the ruins (the game has no code or assets to have the door destroyed) and beat the demo. doing so, you meet chara, next to some abandoned game assets making the background as they comment on how you milk every bit of content this game has to offer, just to see something new. they also wonder if they are mocking them, since they note that toriel had treated you and protected you more than them, adding that they were too also raised by toriel. one flowey cutscene later and the story ends there.

but dangit someone got to me first.

good game tho

i like the bit at the end with the music box, it was very nice

greetings I am stuck on the part where toriel is making a meal, what do you do

this was soo good, i really like the atmosphere and feeling of the game that it seems like not everything is fine and something is terribly wrong with the world.
there were some slow parts, like the choices and the fact that you take a lot of time to walk from someplace to another with not much happening, but i think it gives a creepy and eerie feeling to this game.
anyways, i am so looking forward to this and keep going with the game, can't wait to see more of the story!

Ok, so...

Anybody can explain to me what is going here?
Like, reality is breaking down because you decided to be with Toriel, ok, alright, I got that.

But what's up with Toriel herself, like, does she have some type of werewolf serial killer stuff going on? I guess the fur in the path is because she is a goat but then what is that about? Something is weird with her and there is no answer.

And why does Flowey calls you freaky? I guess because you decided to stay with Toriel but that is what she wanted to do with the child in the first place. There doesn't seem to be anything freaky about your relationship.

Man what is going, there must be somebody smarter than me to tell me what to think.

Wow. Named myself Chara. Awesome cutscene. Nightmares acquired.