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This is great! The writing is really good and same goes for the sounds.
Warning: what I say next will be a spoiler for the game. I love how the writing indicated what was wrong before the reveal. Also, the text being off-centered, weather intentional or not, is really good! It makes it uneasy.
Hey Norbez! I played the game, it's short, suspenseful vignette. Enjoyable. But I just want to tell you that at the end of the game, during the credits, the bottom where you're talking about IFComp and The Mouse is cut off.
Me, you, and the apocalypse, kid. No matter what, I'll always be there for you. I'm your teacher, protector, and friend. You can trust me.
(This is a 5-10 minute game. Please play until the end before rating or commenting. Thanks!)
Made for the #dreamhackjam
#twine
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My game The Mouse, which explores similar themes to this Twine, comes out October 1. https://norbez.itch.io/the-mouse
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