The script for my Sonic fanfilm thus far. Please give constructive critism.

E-102 Gamma

Water:

The cooler water:

RALSEI the lonely prince of the dark...

I can do anything.

Mr. (ANT) Tenna! He's groovy and never glooby!

Strawberry Cream

Tekno teh Canary

My and my son's costume

Zooble! The mismatched cash-piano themselves!