Hello, in this post, I'll be giving some ideas to try to "improve" FNAF 2 movie, and before I start, I need to warn you that there are spoilers here (obviously).

and how will this work?

I put the scenes in the order they appear, and in them I will be putting ideas to "improve"

Note: if a scene does not appear it is because there was no change in it

and to do this, I decided to follow some rules

rules:
-Maintain PG 13.

-Maintain the ideas from the original feature film.

-Additions of scenes and changes are allowed if truly necessary and maintain the sense of the story.

-Removals are forbidden.

Before I start I'll make it clear, these are ideas that I would find interesting, if you don't like them, you can comment on yours.

Of course, if you have any ideas please comment

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ideas to "improve" the movie Five Nights at Freddy's 2

Observations and Rules

Maintain PG 13.

Maintain the ideas from the original feature film.

Additions of scenes and changes are allowed if truly necessary and maintain the sense of the story.

Removals are forbidden.

Ideas and Changes

Charlie's Death

In the initial scene, the boy that Afton (William Afton) lures to the back rooms will go to the restroom, away from people's sight, making it easier for Afton to lure him. A show with the Toy animatronics will be happening, and everything will be dark. Amidst the noise, Charlie will hear a scream coming from the restrooms and will go to see what is happening. Henry will appear and talk briefly with Charlie, making her turn back.

Back at the table with the group, Charlie will see the yellow rabbit (Afton) carrying the boy through a glass door. Charlie will warn the parents and staff, who will ignore her. She will then go after him, and Vanessa will try to stop her (the same happens as in the movie). Afton, instead of taking the boy to the kitchen, will take him to the parts and service room or some secret room. Afton here is testing something involving dittophobia with the Withereds and the child before killing him. Charlie will arrive on stage, and all the animatronics will be there. Henry will be present when Charlie dies on stage. Afton (William) will stare at him while Henry, paralyzed by a security failure that Afton exploited in his own detection system, is unable to intervene, watching Charlie fall.

Vanessa Wakes Up

Instead of waking up to Mike (Mike Schmidt) calling, she will wake up to an alarm clock ringing at 6 am. Added Scene: We will see a bit of Vanessa's life, showing how she is after the stabbing in the first movie, now dealing with nightmares, etc. Mike will call Vanessa, and they will have the same conversation, but obviously adapted to the new scene.

Abby in Class

Teacher's Motivation (Improvement): The teacher must show a valid motivation, even if it's the same reason. The teacher hates what Fazbear has done to robotics, since, thanks to Fazbear, several other restaurants in the animatronic mascot business have opened across the country, making people only interested in robotics for the animatronic mascots. The teacher will show several examples of what robotics is capable of. With the Fazfest, he fears that this surge of interest in animatronic mascots in robotics will return. Abby's project will fail just like in the original. The teacher will ask what it is, and Abby will answer that it is one of her friends. The children will make fun of her since she told the story from the previous movie on the bus and will say it's related to animatronics. The teacher, who already persecuted Abby in the original (for no apparent reason), will persecute her here, in addition to the previous reasons, because Abby always builds animatronics in his classes. The teacher will try to convince and everything else, and will point out that her project is too unfinished for the event, which is on Saturday. Just like the original, he will remove his name from the event to not stain "the college's name." The conversation she has with the boy will be extended, with him saying that the teacher is annoying to everyone and recounting his reasons for being like this. Abby will say that she will complete the project by Saturday, etc. The boy will question a situation that does not work out. Abby will try to show the teacher that she can complete it and prove that animatronic mascots are not something to be despised. The boy will give the idea of fixing the animatronics. Abby will reject the idea, as Mike said it would take too long to fix the animatronics because they were in terrible condition.

Abby and Mike at Home

The scene will remain the same. The only change is: the "ghost hunters" show will be airing their time at the first Freddy's, and this will show that the animatronics are nowhere, making Abby believe even more that Mike is lying.

Mike and Vanessa Meet

Just an extension where there will be more conversation about other subjects.

Abby and Mike at Freddy's

The moment Mike finds the Freddy’s Murder paper, the Fazfest papers will contain an additional piece of information that there will be a surprise at the end of the event; he will read it. There won't be just Fazfest papers; there will be things related to "Aunt Jane's madness." Just like the original, Henry's paper will be hidden behind other papers.

"Ghost Hunters" at the Original Freddy's

Scene Substitution: Here they will be called because Michael (Michael Afton) saw their show at the first Freddy's and called them to check out his location (obviously a lie from him). Location: The original Freddy's will be more hidden since no one takes care of the surrounding vegetation, which will create a kind of "canvas." Michael will seem less strange. He will tell what he has been experiencing during the nights at the restaurant. Puppet: Everyone will be recording the show together, but Lisa will be listening to the Puppet's music. Michael will talk about the Puppet and a "legend" about the Puppet being possessed. Even with the Puppet asleep and inactive, the entire place seems to drive them away anyway. Trap: After the recording, everyone will return to the main area, except Michael, who will invent an excuse to go to his room beforehand. Here Michael will turn on the Toy animatronics to kill the group. Michael will show them the animatronics, and they decide to finish by showing the animatronics. Attack: Lisa will again complain about the music, and everyone will hear it. Michael says it's for the Puppet and keeps her calm, and under no circumstances should they touch the box or the Puppet. Everyone will look at the animatronics, except Lisa (as in the original). Lure: A voice will call Lisa, and we will see a kind of distorted shadow; its eyes are barely visible, but they will attract Lisa's attention enough. Somehow this shadow will be like a magnet, attracting Lisa to the Puppet. Lisa will not call the others, as the shadow has some kind of power sufficient to "hypnotize" her. When Lisa leaves the stage to go to the Puppet, the animatronics will be looking at her. The death by Mangle will happen first, causing Lisa to get scared and drop the music box, breaking it. The death by the Mini Puppets will be slightly altered: the man will look down (already in the water), and they will attack him, clinging to his face, like the Minireenas. He will slip and fall; the rest is the same as the original. Lisa/Charlie vs Michael: Lisa (possessed by Charlie) will actually attack Michael (Afton) in a rage, knocking him down. She tries to expose what Afton (William) did and kill him. Michael will manage to break free because he uses a high-frequency sonic device (based on Henry's designs) that he is testing, temporarily stunning Charlie's spirit. Michael's speech after the escape will be the same; the addition is that his plan will be to use the Puppet to his advantage.

Vanessa Cycling

Just the addition of lines by Afton (William Afton), something manipulative about his death (example: she let him die). Afton will remove the head of the yellow rabbit, and we will see the spring locks attached to his face and neck. He suffers to speak and breathe. He will attack as in the original.

Vanessa's Dream

Show more of Afton's psychological terror over Vanessa. Confrontation: When Vanessa confronts Afton and the doors begin to open until he appears walking and she runs. Here, only the fact that she runs so early will be changed. Afton will approach Vanessa, but for a brief moment, she will try to confront him, but Afton seems to have more power over this dream of hers. Everything will distort, and Vanessa will feel a kind of "telepathic push" from Afton. Thus, she will run. (The rest of the scene will be the same as the original). The scene will not end at night; it will still be day.

Scene Order Change:

New Scene: Charlie Trying to Escape the Pizzeria

Charlie, still possessing Lisa, is at the pizzeria's entrance door, looking at the heavy rain falling. She tries to leave, but is stopped by an invisible barrier (an active spiritual perimeter that Afton implanted). The more time passed, the more Lisa transforms into the Puppet. Everything is dark in the pizzeria. Frenzy: Charlie is a powerful spirit. She realizes that it is not Michael who is trapping her, but the pizzeria itself. Her rage at not being able to bypass this barrier causes the pizzeria to shake, exhausting her energy. Result: Several things will start to explode in the pizzeria. Charlie's anger will cause the pizzeria to shake, making what was already a mess worse. Capture: Michael (Afton) will appear at the exact moment Charlie (exhausted and frustrated) leaves Lisa's body, taking advantage of her vulnerability. Charlie will float throughout the pizzeria until she reaches a kind of mural with several photos of children, and one of them is Vanessa. Michael (Afton) will manage to trap her in one of his father's experiments (something similar to Lefty).

New Scene: Charlie Contacts Vanessa

Vanessa will be dreaming again, so most of what follows will be her dream. In the middle of the night, Vanessa will lose sleep and hear the music box playing. Vanessa will go after this sound, but will hear Charlie's voice. She will ask Vanessa for help, who will deny and disbelieve this dream. Vanessa will confront Charlie. Charlie will see a photo of Vanessa, Mike, and Abby together. The dream will end with Michael staring at Vanessa. Vanessa wakes up.

New Scene: Michael and Charlie

The Puppet will be trapped in Afton's experiment, and will not be able to control herself or the other animatronics (for a short time). Michael's Objective: Michael wants to take the Puppet's control system for all the animatronics to use for his benefit. He will talk about his disappointment with his sister (Vanessa), and how she seems to belong to the Schmidts family. Michael will open the experiment's belly, revealing the Puppet's belly. Release: When Michael is about to open the Puppet's belly, the pizzeria will shake as before, and the Puppet will manage to move in the experiment and get out of it. Michael will be startled but impressed with the Puppet's feat. The Puppet will try to kill Michael (perhaps possessing him and somehow killing him from the inside). Michael will stop her with the sound of the music box. The Puppet will return to Lisa's body, and Michael will flee.

New/Altered Scene: Vanessa Goes to Mike's House

Mike will call Vanessa to talk to her. Conversation between the two. Henry and Charlie: Mike will say that he talked to Henry about Charlotte. There will be an argument, but here it will not end like the original. Mike truly wants to help Vanessa. He will say that she can open up to him and that she doesn't need to face this trauma alone, etc. Mike here thinks that Charlie's murder happened at the first Freddy's.

Puppet Communicates with Abby

It will happen at night, and it will be the same thing. Abby finds Toy Chica. Extension: The scene will be extended to show the other animatronics. Here the other animatronics will appear after Toy Chica. Toy Chica will explain to Abby that the "old bodies" (Classics) are too broken to hold their souls, but luckily, they found out about this pizzeria in some files that were at the first Freddy's. All the Toys will talk to Abby.

Vanessa at Mike's House

It will be the same as the movie, but Mike and Vanessa's argument will be altered. Here he will listen to Vanessa about the Original Freddy's, which will make him go there. Practically no one remembers the Original Freddy's, besides Vanessa, Michael, and Henry. Mike will distrust this original one, as Vanessa's nightmares are really affecting her sanity.

Vanessa at the Original Freddy's

Practically the same thing, but here she will have a new music box. Vanessa will not reveal the perimeter programming so easily.

Mike Goes to the Original Freddy's

He will not enter the Original Freddy's, even with Vanessa giving the location. As mentioned earlier, the Original Freddy's was covered by vegetation, but Mike will still enter this tall vegetation and will find nothing. This will make him doubt and worry about this Original Freddy's.

Abby Frees the Toys

Here, Vanessa will tell her about this programming.

Abby and Chica in the Taxi

Toy Chica will be without her beak, but after the jumpscare, her eyes will return to normal.

Mike Visits Henry

Here the scene will be extended, and we will have some flashbacks. Puppet: Henry will say that from time to time he changes the Puppet's music box because he believes Charlie is in it. Henry used to give the music boxes to Vanessa since Charlie never communicated with him. The rest is the same as the original.

Mike Goes After Abby

Upon arriving at the Original Freddy's location, as mentioned before, the tall vegetation hides the pizzeria. Mike will have some weapon to take down a part of the vegetation to find an entrance to the restaurant.

Mike Finds the Withereds

Addition of a scene: Mike after leaving the room where the Withereds are. We will have a scene in W. Freddy's view with Mike leaving the room.

Mike Finds Lisa

Lisa's face will be distorted and blurred, as if she were really turning into something non-human, like a puppet. Parts of her body are torn, as if she were stretched without time to adapt.

Toy Chica Kills the Teacher

When Chica grabs the teacher's head to kill him, the teacher will try to attack her to get away. Result: He knocks off Chica's beak, and we will see her with her black eyes only with the flickering light of the room. From Chica's mouth, the teacher will be able to see something like thick wires, which were the Puppet's hands.

Vanessa Explaining About Charlie to Mike

Addition: She will explain about Afton and the Original Freddy's. Vanessa will explain that Afton (William) never used the Original Freddy's to kill guards because of Charlie. Afton feared Charlie, as he couldn't fool her with the drawings. Afton spent years studying, so he could use Charlie, but never succeeded. However, Michael (Afton), using his father's containment technology, is exploiting the location for his own purposes.

Toy Freddy at Fazfest

The boy dressed as Bonnie will think it is one of the surprises the event would have.

Toys in the City

Here the Toys will behave more like in the games (they will be more hidden and have those weird poses they made). The Toys really need to look like a threat.

Gameplay Scene (Part 1)

The scene will be extended. Mike will not discover the mask mechanic out of nowhere. Mask Discovery: Mike will see the silhouette of some Withered when pointing the light down the hallway. He will then try to communicate with Vanessa via walkie talkie, but it won't work. Mike will then look for something telling him how to defend himself, thus finding a tape (like the FNAF 1 one for guards). This tape will explain security things and the animatronics. The animatronics are turned on late at night to be on "patrol" against intruders. For the night guard not to be caught, he just needs to wear the mask.

Mangle Attacks Vanessa

Mangle will be more violent here. Mangle will try to bite Vanessa's head. Mangle will pierce the car roof. Mangle will make its iconic noise.

Toy Freddy's Attack

The scene will mostly be the same thing. Execution: When the woman turns off the TV, Toy Freddy will be behind her. When she turns around, Toy Freddy will be in the pose it makes when arriving at the office in the game. The lights in the house will flicker, and Toy Freddy will kill her. Her husband will hear her screams and go to the living room. Toy Freddy will be on top of her like an animal. Toy Freddy turns its head back and starts shaking while making some kind of sound (like Freddy's growl in FNAF 1). The house will be dark, and Toy Freddy will be behind her husband. We will see only the white dots in its dark eyes. Upon finding the man in the dark, Toy Freddy will utter the phrase in the movie. Just like Toy Chica, it will turn on the "flashlight" in its eyes to kill the man. Vanessa will prevent the man's death (the same way as the original).

Gameplay Scene (Part 2)

W. Freddy appears to Mike, and he wears the mask. W. Freddy's mouth will be wide open, making it clear that if Mike were not fast enough, the animatronic would have killed him. When W. Freddy finishes scanning Mike, the lights will flicker, and he will leave the room. Ballon Boy will not appear now. Ballon Boy will not appear behind the monitor; it will be replaced by JJ, who will be a distraction.

Gameplay Scene (Part 3)

Toy Bonnie prepares to attack. We will see Toy Bonnie's perspective (something like Michael Myers). Ballon Boy will not appear now. W. Bonnie will appear and actually try to jumpscare Mike, almost disconnecting the computer, which would make Mike lose all progress. W. Bonnie will almost crush Mike's hand, but in time, he puts on the mask. The Puppet will try to force the Withereds' programming to stop recognizing Mike as an animatronic.

Toy Bonnie Attacks the Mother

The woman hears the sound of a knife; upon turning around, she is startled by Toy Bonnie, who grabs her arm and plunges the knife into her head. Toy Bonnie will return to the room and leave the house with the girl, going to the neighbor's house.

Gameplay Scene (Part 3) - Climax in the Office

Mike will hear a sound in the hallway; he will point the flashlight and we will see Foxy, almost at the room entrance. At the same time, Chica comes out of the ventilation. Mike will drop the flashlight turned on the desk and put on the mask. The flashlight will be pointed at Foxy. Just like in the movie, we will see Foxy's recognition failing, but the flashlight will make him leave. Mike will think Foxy is also fooled by the mask. Chica also leaves. A short time will pass. Ballon Boy will not appear behind the monitor; it will be replaced by JJ, who will be a distraction. Mike will look at JJ and hear the sounds in the hallway again. He will pick up the flashlight to look, but it is out of battery. Ballon Boy will laugh and start an irritating sound, while turning on a light in its eyes. Ballon Boy holds the flashlight batteries. Mike, just like the movie, will rip off Ballon Boy's head. Freddy will be at the Office entrance, and JJ will disappear. Bonnie and Chica will be in the ventilations, while Foxy is at the end of the hallway. The animatronics will be faster here, and they will soon be in front of Mike (except Foxy). Foxy hums, preparing to run and jump. Mike quickly tries to turn off the animatronics. Conflict with Puppet: The Withereds seem not to see Mike as an animatronic, even with the mask, this is because the Puppet is trying to override their system. W. Freddy will grab the monitor, trying to prevent Mike from succeeding. W. Bonnie and W. Chica will attack Mike. W. Foxy runs to the office door and jumps to kill Mike. Mike accidentally turns on the flashlight, which disorients Foxy. The room flickers while all this happens. Mike manages to turn off the animatronics but gets injured. Mike has a cut on his face made by Foxy. After this, it will be the same as the original.

Toy Chica and Abby at Home

Practically the same thing. Addition: We will see in Chica's view a message indicating that Mike turned off the animatronic and that it was later turned on again with the signal coming no longer from the Puppet, but from something else (from Michael).

Vanessa and Mike in Their Cars

Addition: Mike will ask Vanessa to call Jeremiah for help, while he tries to ask for help from the FNAF 1 animatronics. Vanessa will ask Jeremiah for help. Mike asks the animatronics for help. The scene here needs to seem urgent and desperate. Mike's speech will be changed, as it simply seems like something like: if you love Jesus, leave a like on the video. Mike is desperate; he calls out to the animatronics. He speaks fast, as if stumbling over every word. He starts crying.

Vanessa Gets a Ride with Jeremiah

Reframed Scene: The car Vanessa is driving will break down, and she will have to run as fast as she can to get to Mike's house. Jeremiah will not appear to give her a ride (removing the convenience of the original).

Michael Afton Appears at Mike's House

Mike, Abby, and Vanessa will be cornered by the animatronics. But, unlike the original, the animatronics will be forming a kind of barrier around them, just waiting for Michael to command. Vanessa will try to go to Michael to have their conversation, but Mangle will not let her. Here everything will indicate that they will really die, showing Mangle "Biting" Abby's head. Everything goes dark, the house lights flicker, and we see the animatronics (Classics) destroying each of the Toys. The FNAF 1 animatronics will be more broken. Jeremiah will arrive and stop Michael like the original. Jeremiah will enter the house and see the FNAF 1 animatronics "shutting down."

Souls Are Freed

Altered Reason: This idea that they cannot leave the pizzeria does not make sense for the Classics (the scene with Golden Freddy at Mike's house proves this). The new reason is that the animatronics are too broken, and will soon no longer withstand the children's souls. The souls of all 5 children will appear and talk to them. Jeremiah will be startled by the ghost children. The rest is normal.

Puppet Possesses Vanessa

Vanessa at the door hears noises through Mike's house. She will look back, and the music box will play. Charlie (Puppet) refuses liberation. She will quickly go to Vanessa, possessing her. We see that this is her conscious choice, as she decides to be the living weapon to hunt and permanently eliminate the threat of the Afton family. The scene ends with Vanessa having white eyes and the Puppet's makeup appearing on her face.