4 years ago

Read the article for chapter 1 of a story im working on! Im thinking of a title for it still.


Chapter 1 : Darkness of the confusion

??? : What? Where? How? All i remember is being at freddy fazbears pizza the one with the rockstar animatronics and mediocres then blacking out when it started getting hotter and my vision turned bright orange like fire...maybe it was fire.

John : At least i remember who i am ,I am john and i am 28 years old, i still wonder where i am though as this is not the pizzeria and im somewhere way different it seems...Maybe this is a dream or is it someones twisted entertainment?

Narrator : John was in a small office with a desk with two draws and a computer on top with a keyboard and some shelves with cleaning supplies and for some reason some bottles with pills in them. The light was bright somehow but still flickering a bit in the room John was in but there wasnt much else apart from the doorway next to John as John had woke up in the corner of the room.

John : I should maybe explore this place to maybe learn more and see if there is anybody else here apart from me...i hope there is...

Narrator : At that moment there were metal clanking sounds that sounded like animatronic foot steps and John immediately held his breath and stayed still and silent hoping that whatever was there wouldnt find him.

bonnie : Is anybody there? Come out if your there for a rockin time with my blazin guitar and me the blue friendly bunny called bonnie! Freddy and me would love to have an audience to entertain instead of performing for our animatronic friends everyday! Humans are always funner to perform with!

Narrator : John heard the voice and immediately knew it was bonnies but became even more confused as how was bonnie here because he was burned...right? Where could he be?

John : How is bonnie here? He was burned at a pizzeria...this just raises more questions for me about where i am.

Bonnie : Come out! Come on we dont bite we just have fun! Well if u wont come out then i guess u will miss the fantasy of our shows coming to life!

Narrator : The clanking noise became lower as bonnie walked away down the hallway to somewhere else. Suddenly there was vent noises and weird laughing like something knew John was there.

??? : I promise not to disappoint if u come out where u are! You cant hide! I have already found u human!

Narrator : suddenly the vent on the ceiling bust open and a weird molten bear had popped out of it with a burned mask and its body just a pile of wires. The molten bears mask looked like funtime freddys but burned and molten material.

John : W-who are u? Where am I?! And...who else is here with u because i saw bonnie so i bet there are more of u! Why do u look like funtime freddy is well!

Molten freddy : Im Molten Freddy a salvage at the pizzeria u were at! I only know that because i recognize u being there And i dont know where we are but Im just trying to find anybody that is here. I dont even know how many people there is here right now but probably a few as i have already talked to a few but i think more will come! And lets just say im apart of funtime freddy and some others also your lucky im not in the mood for killing and am just confused in this weird labrynth sort of thing! It reminds me of the pizzeria u were at.

John : Uhh...well so your name is Molten freddy?

Molten Freddy : Yes and remember it dont call me funtime freddy or I will be annoyed but for now we will work together maybe a bit.

John : Well thats a relief and dont worry i will remember your name Molten Freddy! Also we should get searching maybe for more people as u said there is probably and i feel a bit more safe and confident now that u just came and were working together...right?

Molten Freddy : Dont push your luck too much but yes we are working together but we should both be on guard for anything as i havent fully explored everywhere and we should find a map of here somewhere. Now come on lets start searching in the main office for the map because thats where it is most likely but come on!

Narrator : John and Molten freddy went into the hallway and started walking to the main office, Molten freddy was just walking and John was just following hoping this wasnt a trick of some sort.

Molten Freddy : Look this isnt a trick so calm down and come on!

Narrator : Molten Freddy and John arrived at the main office door.

(Thats the end of chapter 1 ! I will just say that if i decide to we may have some pictures so u know what some of the scenes look like! Chapter 2 is a lot longer than this chapter and has a picture so when i decide to show that be excited! Also if even can maybe react to it on youtube or something or just do a mini video reading it? Just do what u want and read it also the story will be a long time from finishing probably because it will be a fun one and check out maybe my previous stories i have done that i may add somewhere on my profile!)



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