Am I on the right track?

I'm trying to learn how to get down a (similar) art style of the fnaf sexilized games (with my own little spin on it) so I can make a character as a gift to my boyfriend. Does it look alright?

Originally gonna ask opinions on another design but it wasn't really fnaf realted enough, so I made this.

Feel free to give opinions, advice, and subjections (just know I'll probably forget gamejolt for about a month then reply).

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Added a little *dazzle*.

(Idk if people see this too much, but I've learned that posting on Jame jolt let's my things be recognized by Google lens, which I think is cool ദ്ദി)

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I saw how you asked for Tubert in the Slime 6 art style about a week ago, and sense I was already practicing drawing I decided to make that. Hope you like it ദ്ദി(ᵔᗜᵔ).

TLDR: I did my first attempt at fan art and mostly failed. Womp womp

For the zero people who were slightly interested in what I made last time, after a week of forgetting about it I finally finished it.

Its still not great, but I leaned £=

Still could work on some things, but I think I'm getting better (=

I added color and outline in Pixlr (an also an alternative color just for fun).

Shoobies leave a sticky trail of mucus in their wake, which can impede movement for any creature that steps in it.

Updated the chest in the maze, adding sound, particles and better animation. But what's in the chest?