Am I on the right track?

I'm trying to learn how to get down a (similar) art style of the fnaf sexilized games (with my own little spin on it) so I can make a character as a gift to my boyfriend. Does it look alright?

Springtrap pins.

I think I did ok £=

I added color and outline in Pixlr (an also an alternative color just for fun).

Redwomen saying a dead meme

TLDR: I did my first attempt at fan art and mostly failed. Womp womp

For the zero people who were slightly interested in what I made last time, after a week of forgetting about it I finally finished it.

Its still not great, but I leaned £=

*FAMOUS LAST WORDS BEFORE TRAGEDY*

Originally gonna ask opinions on another design but it wasn't really fnaf realted enough, so I made this.

Feel free to give opinions, advice, and subjections (just know I'll probably forget gamejolt for about a month then reply).

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Nightmare Chica

So

i may or may not make an full art of some person or i may just leave this like that-