Worried about SMTR (read article)

5 years ago

You know, I just thought of something. I’m not sure about how well my Super Mario: Toriel’s Revenge (SMTR) comic is going to be received. I mean, the comic itself is just weird. Mario, UT, Zelda, and Fnaf? Toriel acting out of character... the dialogue isn’t good, the action feels slow and clumsy, I barely show off any of the characters personality traits, it’s predictable, and some things just don’t make sense. To make things worse, I’m currently on page 98 of this story, so I can’t even fix any of those mistakes, no matter how much you criticize them. And about Toriel acting out of character... the reason why could be somewhat controversial. Not anything serious like real world issues, just something that might turn hardcore UT and Mario fans off and ruin the story for them... so who knows...

well, maybe it’s not that bad, artists usually find some way to criticize their own art, so perhaps it will be fine...

also, if you don’t know what I’m talking about: https://gamejolt.com/@Hero-Knight/post/super-mario-toriel-s-revenge-title-page-read-article-maq62dds

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I forgot to add this in other communities, as usual

OG post: https://gamejolt.com/p/yes-tysm-for-1000-followers-i-was-plannin…

@Hero-Knight63

Yes! Tysm for 1000 followers! I was planning to drew some of my friends with me, but I don’t really have the time to draw that, cuz of other plans, so for now...um, here’s this.