10 months ago

Written Storyboard VideoClip [Her Death] (name work in progress)

Warning mention of "Endless self Sleep" and F8d words..

SPOILERS



  • Lina laying in bed with her back turned to the room. Cuddling her blanket, with which she’s halfway covered. Pushing her face into it, since she is about to cry of what she fears might happen in this dark and cold night.

  • The camera zooms in as it fades to the next day. Lina finally fell asleep. It was the next day and she was laying under her blanket like always.

  • There's a knock on the door. The door got slightly opened. A soft and sweet woman voice called "Lina! are you awake?,,

  • Lina woke up. Her face marks turned black as well as some hair strands.

  • The woman came in but the camera was on Lina. The woman is never shown on camera. She said "Here I got you a croissant. Please stay in your room until I tell you that you can come out. Okay,, in her soft but slightly sad voice

  • She went out of the room again closing the door behind her

  • Lina sat on the bed and was about to bite into the croissant when she noticed why she should stay in her room

  • She put the croissant aside and started crying. She remembered Lila was trying to kill herself and must have done it last night.



WiP

please if you have any tips on what to make and write/draw better on this it be good to know

I'm not planning to draw the dead Lila and Idk how to showcase that she is dead


If your gotten sad after reading this

Lila and Lina will see each other soon again in this part of the story

how or why I can't say though


I'm gonna have to rewrite this in a proper story way for Wattpad ones I'm done with this

#TheQueendoms #SadStory





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