Constructive Criticism Corner in The Growing Artist Aggregation

My attempt at anatomy (Please provide criticism and please be respectful in the comments)

In relation to my last post: which version you like more?

(version 1 is the first image, v 2 is the second and so on. Just fyi)

again: this is not my oc, the original owner (artlover1225 on artfight) allowed me to rework them a bit, just for fun ^^

A merc, an undead man, a ghoul

(Tell me what i did wrong)

#art #traditional #oc

Give me some advice on what could make this better

Working on a new signature of sorts, what do yous all think? (Ignore the fact I havnae posted in like months lol)